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REFUSAL LETTER- Thank you for your interest in studying in Canada. After careful review of your study permit application and supporting documentation, I have determined that your application does not meet the requirements of the Immigration and Refugee Protection Act (IRPA) and Immigration and Refugee Protection Regulations (IRPR). I am refusing your application on the following grounds:

• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.You are welcome to reapply if you can address the concern.All new applications accompanied by new processing fee

ABOUT MY APPLICATION- Language abilities-I submitted My IELTS test report and I had overall 7 bands with 8 in reading,7.5 in listening,6.5 in speaking and 6.5 in writing.The requirement for SDS visa is 6 bands.

previous education-I finished my high school recently and had Physics,chemistry and math as main subject in 10th and 12th.I got admitted to bachelors of computer science and met entry requirement for the course.

travel history-I recently turned 18 and I really did not get the chance to travel in childhood so I have no prior travel history to any country.

personal establishment,financial ability and ties to home country-I showed the necessary amount to fulfill my study and living cost.I also showed the proof of income.

STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

About the course- I have been accepted into Bachelor of Sciences program at Memorial University, NL, Canada. It is a four years degree course and has wide range of major and minor subjects to choose and pursue according to one’s interest. The B.Sc program also gives me an option to take Computer Science as a major that has always fascinated me. If I talk about world of computers and its applications, it has taken our world by storm. Specially, in a growing economy like India, it is playing a pivotal role in providing innovative and efficient solutions to our problems. The Computer Science major has a great deal of scope in India. There are wide range of software and applications that are there in the market and have made our life much easier. I can give an example of platforms like Flipkart, Uber, Ola, Amazon, Zomato etc. that has provided jobs to many while delivering efficient services to consumers. For instance, the food delivery app like Zomato has given jobs to many people and has given business to many restaurants. It has put on map those restaurants also that no one till recent times knew about. Similarly, Uber and Ola has made transportation much easier lessened the requirements of public transport.

Future plans Regarding my goals for the future, I plan to take what I learn in Canada and apply it to the industry in my native country. The industry is rapidly growing and shows great potential, yet compared to other, more advanced countries it is still in its relative infancy. By studying and getting a degree in Canada, I expect to have the expertise, the perspective, and the experience necessary to lead our industry to a new era. I want to use the knowledge and experience from Canada to get a job in India.

Why Canada is my ultimate destination? It is a fact that Canada is an ultimate destination for pursuing studies as it has first rate education system with high standards. The education provided in Canada is globally recognized. The education system is based on new ideas, practical knowledge and career oriented training that is really helpful in getting placed in renowned companies. Specially, degree from a Canadian University has a great value in India and in Indian companies. Canada also provides a secure environment for students and welcomes international students with warm hands.

About Memorial University- Memorial Universities’ National Ranking is ARWU National (21–24), QS National (22–25), Times National (19–21). This University has a holistic approach to learning and the importance to the educational, cultural and social aspects shows their dedication to their students; a dedication that I would be honored to receive. They are highly involved in student success and participation in the city’s community and society as a whole. At Memorial University more than 18,000 students from over 100 countries come together to discover. As one of the top 20 research universities in Canada, Memorial has more than 30 research centers and received more than $100 million in research funding in 2016-17. It provides advanced hand on practice on practical implementation and state- of-art facilities. I believe, I will have great overall growth while studying in this University.

Financial Support

My parents are Govt. employees who are still serving as teachers. They will be supporting my education and other financial needs. I have attached their financials that includes bank statements, ITRs, Fixed Deposits, PPF for your kind reference. I have already paid my fees to the college and I have also received my GIC certificate. I have also got my medical done. I have also made proper financial arrangements for my stay in Canada.To sum it up, I am very much hopeful that my application for the Study Visa will be given a kind consideration so that I can pursue my dreams and achieve my goals. As I am the only son and will be taking over the baton of my family responsibilities, I also see this as a great opportunity to learn and support my family. I look forward to study in Memorial University and pursue my career in India after four years. enter image description here

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    Ties to home country can be very difficult to demonstrate when one is young and just out of school. Building even a limited travel history might help. Much of your SoP reads as if it’s been lifted from the web/university promotional material. Make it less impersonal eg there must be many places where you could study Computer Science in India, so explain why you specifically chose Canada. As to the refusal affecting other applications, it’s almost certain you’d be asked about previous visa refusals. If you don’t address the concerns you’ll likely be refused again. – Traveller Sep 7 at 6:46
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Their main concern seems the fear that you may not return.

This may be caused by the way your family situation was described and/or the way their financial situation was given.

Read a very good discription on how bank statements should not look like:


This is probably a case for a specialized Immigration Lawyer, who should look through your application to determine the cause of the rejection.

That reason may not only apply to Canada, but also to other countries.

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